1、更多资料添加微信号：DEM2008 淘宝搜索店铺：优尖升教育 网址：话题作文1 阅读可以使人开阔视野，阅读可使人心旷神怡，不管是参加中国汉字听写大会，还是中国诗词大会，都需要有良好的阅读基础。下面请大家谈谈阅读的好处并在生活中养成良好的阅读习惯。注意：作文字数，不低于60字.参考词汇：increase our knowledge open up our eyes improve writing skills learn the world affairs without going out make the life colorfulReading is very important in t
2、he whole life for people. There are many benefits of reading_Therefore, start reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. Then, you may find the great charm and benefits of reading.【答案】Reading is very important in the whole life for people. There are many benefits of reading.Firstly,
3、reading increases our knowledge. It teaches us skills about getting a good job, cooking and so on. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve writing skills. Before you learn to write, you must know how others write. Thirdly, reading can open up our eyes and we can learn the world affairs without go
4、ing out. we can know how things happened in the history and how to avoid bad things from happening. Finally, reading all kinds of books can make our life colorful. Therefore, start reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. Then, you may find the great charm and benefits of reading【解
5、析】此篇书面表达是根据提示介绍读书的好处及养成良好的阅读习惯。文章的时态以写作时为主。写作时注意firstly，secondly，thirdly，Finally的使用。开篇点题，分析读书的好处。最后发出呼吁让人们读书。2马上要初中毕业了，大家都是依依不舍的。班主任决定在下周举办一场“My Life At School” 主题 班会 , 邀请全班同学参加。请你根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿。美好的回忆1.与同学融洽相处； 2.得到老师的帮助；3.获得交换生机会； 4.参加志愿者活动。不开心的事情1.好朋友李华转学； 2.不擅长语文写作。未来展望1. 升上理想的学校；2. 能结识更多朋友；3. 请你补
6、充(至少两点)My Life At SchoolHow time flies! Its unbelievable that Im going to graduate from my beloved school. 【答案】My Life At SchoolHow time flies! Its unbelievable that Im going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember. In the junior school, I got along well with my classma
7、tes. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were
8、also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing. I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am
9、in high school and can go to a good college.【详解】这篇作文要求我们以My Life At School为题，写一篇发言稿。题目中利用表格的形式，展示了文章的具体内容，学生们可以此为提纲进行写作。审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意根据表达需要使用正确时态，并注意谓语动词的正确形式。内容应主要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回忆；然后是不开心的事情；最后展望自己未来的高中生活。表格中有非常具体的提示，但不能逐词翻译表格中的短语，应把他们变成自己的话，并用英语表达出来。写作时应注意：文章中应包括表格中的所有信息，不能遗漏要点；第三
10、部分的内容中还需要自己发挥想象力进行补充，注意应合情合理，与上文很好地衔接。另外注意句式结构要符合英语的表达习惯，用完整的句子表达。句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用适当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，回忆了自己的初中生活，并展望了未来。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰。短文分三段，第一段基本是题目中给出的开头，作者使用一句话引出下文；第二段是主体，介绍了过去美好的回忆以及不开心的事情；最后一段对未来进行了展望。各部分内容安排合理，有层次、有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的
11、时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，注意了动词正确形式的变化。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。语言准确、得体，表达自然、流畅。短文中使用了丰富的句型和短语，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia.Luckily, we kept in touch with each other
12、 through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.等。3健康的体魄离不开好的生活习惯。同样，对于学生来说优异成绩的取得也需要好的学习习惯。请根据以下要点提示，以“How to Develop Good Study Habits”为题写一篇英语短文谈谈自己的看法。提示：1. 养成好的学习习惯的好处；2. 学生中不良学习习惯的表现；3.
13、 对养成好的学习习惯的建议（至少提三条建议）。要求：1. 内容必须包括以上提示要点可以，适当发挥；2. 90词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。How to Develop Good Study Habits Every student wants to study well, but its not easy._【答案】How to Develop Good Study HabitsEvery student wants to study well, but it s not easy. Good study habits help us learn better and more qui
14、ckly. However, not all students have developed good study habits. Some are too lazy to finish their homework on time. Some always want to play instead of studying. So how can we develop good study habits?First, you should pay attention to the study time. The best time to study is when you arent feel
15、ing sleepy. Second, find a comfortable place to study, but not too comfortable or you may go to sleep! Third, youd better ask for help when having trouble studying.Always remember these suggestions and follow them. Then youll find it not so hard to study well.【解析】【分析】这篇书面表达要求学生写出如何培养良好的学习习惯。【详解】考生要根
16、据提示的3点进行发挥。在内容方面，首先要写出好的学习习惯的好处，也就是为什么要培养好的学习习惯；其次是在学习中发现的不好的学习习惯；最后提出自己对养成好的学习习惯的建议；在语言方面，使用考生自己熟悉的句型，简洁无错；在规范方面，注意单词拼写，标点防护好的正确使用。4在我们的身边有许多人，他们一直用自己的优秀品格影响着我们，他们虽然平凡但却崇高。某英文网站正在开展 “My Role Model”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：谁是你身边的榜样，为什么他/她会成为你的榜样，以及你从他/她身上学习到了什么。提示词语：helpful, hard-working, love, ne
17、ver give up提示问题： Who is your role model? Why? What do you learn from him/her?【答案】I have a role model just around me. She is my classmates Amy. She is very helpful. Whenever we have troubles, she is always ready to help us. One day, I fell off my bike. She helped me stand up and took me to the hospit
18、al. She is also hard-working. She studies very hard and always gets good marks. When she meets difficulties in study, she will try to solve it by herself. I will learn from her. She gives love to others. She never gives up.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以My Role Model为题，谈一谈你身边的榜样，他/她为什么成为你的榜样，以及你从他/她身上学到了什么。这是一篇话题
19、作文，短文给我们了一个题目和大概的写作提纲，而具体的写作内容需要学生们自己发挥想象力，组织语言，补充细节内容，并且用正确的英语表达出来，这是写作中的一个难点。学生们可以从自己的日常生活入手，寻找身边值得自己学习的榜样，如自己的同学、朋友、亲戚等。叙述清楚他们身上有什么值得你学习的，可以举例证明。另一个难点是英语的表达，需要注意不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。如可以使用简单句结构，穿插使用并列句或者复合句。注意根据表达的需要使用正确的时态，语句之间应使用连接成分，使文意连贯。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，作者介绍了自己的同学Amy是自己的榜样，文章着重介绍Amy身上
20、的一些优秀的品质，并用具体的事例说明，增强了说服力。短文开头先直接点明这个榜样是谁；然后介绍了她身上的优秀品质，如helpful、hardworking。短文中使用的时态非常准确，用到了一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时，符合表达需要，谓语动词的形式变化也很准确。短文里使用了简单句、状语从句、宾语从句等句型，长短句结合使文章节奏富于变化。短文中较好的句型有Whenever we have troubles, she is always ready to help us.、She studies very hard and always gets good marks. 、When she me
21、ets difficulties in study, she will try to solve it by herself.等等。5假如你是李华，于4月13日星期五这一天参加了学校组织的郊游活动.请你以 school trip 为主题，写一则英文日记，内容包括参加活动的人员、集合时间、郊游地点、交通方式、活动内容以及个人感受等.要求:(1)80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；(3)日记中不得出现真实的人名和校名.Friday， April 13thIt was sunny today.We went on a school trip._【答案】It w
22、as sunmy today. We went on a school trip. We visited the Greenery Farm and it was great fun.All of our classmates met at the school gate at 7: 00 a.m， and went to the farm by bus. On arriving there， we were given a warm welcome by the farm workers. Then one of the workers showed us around the farm，
23、where we learned a lot about farming.At noon， we had a picnic， during which we enjoyed ourselves in the sunshine， singing， dancing and flying the kites. We did love the fresh air and the beauty of nature. We took lots of pictures. Time flied! It was time for us to leave though we didnt want to. It w
24、as really an unforgettable and meaningful trip for us.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份写一篇日记，记叙自己在4月13日，星期五这一天参加学校组织的郊游活动。内容包括参加活动的人员、集合时间、郊游地点、交通方式、活动内容以及个人感受等。题目中并未规定具体的写作内容，因此学生们应发挥自己的主观能动性和想象力，充分调动自己所学的语言知识储备，根据提示归纳出写作要点，自主确定写作内容，不能遗漏要点，这是写作中的一个难点。另外，写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，因此不能根据汉语的思维写汉语式的句子，应从句子的整体结构出发，使用恰当的
25、句式，并用完整的句子结构。正确使用be动词、实意动词、名词单复数以及形容词和副词等，可以用简单句为主，使文章简洁、明了。穿插使用较长、较复杂的句子，提升文章档次。还应注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，增强文章的连贯性。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求记叙了自己的一次郊游活动。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息，如参加活动的人员、集合时间、郊游地点、交通方式、活动内容以及个人感受等，没有遗漏要点。文章中作者按照时间的顺序记叙这一天的活动，内容安排条理、清晰，结构清楚。其次短文中语法规范，语言得体。文章以一般过去时态为主，动词都变成了过去式，尤其是注意了不规则动词过去式的形式
26、。句子结构以简单句为主，叙述简洁、明了，也使用了一些较复杂的句式，如并列句、复合句、非谓语动词等。文章中较好的句型有We visited the Greenery Farm and it was great fun.、All of our classmates met at the school gate at 7: 00 a， m， and went to the farm by bus.、 On arriving there, we were given a warm welcome by the farm workers、At noon, we had a picnic, during
27、which we enjoyed ourselves in the sunshine, singing, dancing and flying the kites、It was time for us to leave though we didnt want to. 、It was really an unforgettable and meaningful trip for us.等等。6请以“My Travelling Plan”为题写一篇短文介绍你的旅行计划，提示信息如下：1.Where are you going and who are you going with?2.Why are you going there?3.What are you going to do there? 注意：1.书写清晰，字迹工整，行文流畅，语句通顺，内容完整。2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。3.字数在80-100词。【答案】I am going to travel in Beijing with my friends next month. Be
