1、北京曲一线图书策划有限公司 2024版5年高考3年模拟A版题型六读后续写考情探究1题型分析卷别写作任务2022新高考本文以赛跑为线索展开。文章讲述了主人翁David因脑疾导致行动不便,教练担心他被嘲笑而让他自己选择是否继续参加越野赛跑。在作者的鼓励下,David重新站在起跑线上。2021新高考本文以母亲节为线索展开。文章讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了给母亲做一份美味的早餐,自己动手做饭。但不幸的是,他们连连失败,后来在父亲的帮助下,获得成功。2020新高考本文以助人为乐为线索展开。在经济衰退时期,Meredith女士和她的孩子们对Bernard一家伸出援手。孩子们制作爆米花,Bernar
2、d销售,最终他们成功帮助Bernard一家走出困境。注:新高考卷和新高考卷读后续写部分试题相同。20202022年新高考读后续写提供一段350词以内的语言材料,要求考生依据材料内容和所给段落开头语续写150词左右,将其发展成一篇与给定材料逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。三篇文章均为乐于助人、团结友爱等宣传正能量的话题。文本选材紧贴考生生活,主题思想明确,内容积极向上,语言难度适中,充分体现“以续促写,以续促学”的命题特点。三篇文章以生动地道的语言给考生提供语言输入;以人物的情感变化培养考生的文化意识;以构思后续情节考查考生的思维品质;以结构完整、情节融洽为续写标准,检查考生的学习能力和语言水平
3、,发挥了考试的积极导向作用和评价功能。2备考建议阅读英文小说,汲取文学素养在高三紧张的学习之余,考生可以安排适量的名著阅读,体验和感受名著的篇章结构、叙事风格、语言风格、人物塑造和主题升华的方式方法,并有意识地将其慢慢渗透到写作实践中。此外,也可以利用完形填空和阅读理解题型中的记叙文进行文本解读训练,结合题目进行深入挖掘,包括语篇主旨、语篇结构、记叙文六要素、语言特点等。 强化句型训练,注重灵活运用优秀的读后续写短文不仅要求考生运用准确的语言,还需要考生具有灵活运用各种句型的意识和能力,例如定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句、强调句、倒装句、动词的非谓语形式、 with的复合结构等。考生在备考阶段
4、要积极主动地在写作中运用丰富的句型,在教师指导和同学帮助下,不断提高句型的准确性,逐步形成有个人特色的语言风格,这样才能在考试中取得优秀的成绩。深入解读内容,续写逻辑连贯考生要想写好读后续写这类新型的作文题型,首先要对所给的材料进行充分且深度的解读。在理解所给材料的体裁特征、语言风格、写作特点后,还要弄清楚所给材料的主要人物、故事情节等具体内容。例如在写2021年新高考读后续写时,要深入理解父亲这一角色出现的原因和作用:两个孩子做早餐不熟练,需要父亲的指导。所以在续写部分,父亲应该参与其中,指导孩子做早餐。在语言风格方面,我们可以发现2022年读后续写所给的阅读文本含有直接引语,考生在续写部分
5、要保持原有文本的语言风格。 积累语言素材,建立个人语料库一篇优秀的读后续写文章要求考生使用准确、地道的语言,这就需要考生在备考阶段注重语言素材的积累,并进行分门别类。例如表示心情的表达:dance/jump for joy, brighten sth. up, be wild with joy等;表示“看”这一动作的表达:wink at sb., glance at sth., squint sb.s eyes等。这些具体准确的语言会使续写部分更加生动形象。Writing 1 (2022新高考)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was the da
6、y of the big crosscountry run. Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were warming up and walking the route through thick evergreen forest.I looked around and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence. He was small for ten years
7、 old. His usual big toothy smile was absent today. I walked over and asked him why he wasnt with the other children. He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run.What was wrong? He had worked so hard for this event!I quickly searched the crowd for the schools coach and asked him what had hap
8、pened. “I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him,” he explained uncomfortably. “I gave him the choice to run or not, and let him decide.”I bit back my frustration(懊恼). I knew the coach meant wellhe thought he was doing the right thing. After making sure that David could run if he
9、 wanted, I turned to find him coming towards me, his small body rocking from side to side as he swung his feet forward.David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or running like other children, but at school his classmates thought of him as a regular kid. He always participated to th
10、e best of his ability in whatever they were doing. That was why none of the children thought it unusual that David had decided to join the crosscountry team. It just took him longerthats all. David had not missed a single practice, and although he always finished his run long after the other childre
11、n, he did always finish. As a special education teacher at the school, I was familiar with the challenges David faced and was proud of his strong determination.注意:续写词数应为150左右。We sat down next to each other, but David wouldnt look at me. I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other
12、 runners. 答案We sat down next to each other, but David wouldnt look at me. “Why do you give up the run, David?” I whispered to him. “I will be a loser, and others will laugh at me,” he murmured, with his face flushing. I hugged him tightly, saying, “You are a determined boy, and I believe you can fac
13、e the challenge bravely. But, more importantly, it is participation rather than the result that matters to you.” Having been inspired by what I said, David looked up and said firmly, “I will run.”I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. Hearing the gun blasting, they
14、rushed out like arrows, except for David, who fell behind soon despite great efforts. “Come on, David!” I shouted crazily in the crowd. Sweaty and exhausted as he was, he kept running. Finally, when David struggled to cross the finishing line, the crowd erupted into wild cheers and thunderous applau
15、se. He embraced me with tears streaming down his face. I am, once again, proud of his strong determination.(151 words)Writing 2 (2021新高考)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISEThe twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day
16、. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The
17、 pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixt
18、ure. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she
19、 turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna to
20、ld Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.注意:续写词数应为1
21、50左右。As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 答案As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Knowing what they were preparing for, he was greatly surprised. So immediately
22、, he offered to get involved in the kids job. Firstly, he put the pot of porridge over a gentle heat, asking Jeff to watch out for it going for fifteen minutes. And then he asked Jenna to break another two eggs and mix them with milk. Then, with all preparations done, they started to fry bread toget
23、her. In a flash, a sweet smell filled the air in the kitchen.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Eyes opened, the woman heard a harmonious “Happy Mothers Day” from her twin kids with a hot sweet breakfast before her. Behind the children stood their father, who told her
24、 the whole story. After learning about what happened, she rose quickly to check the boys hand. Mother hugged them tightly, with tears rolling down her cheeks. “Thank you, my honey,” said the mother. “Thats the best gift Ive ever had.”(153 words)Writing 3 (2020新高考)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文
25、。The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges. Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She sp
26、ent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them. One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took ca
27、re of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boyhis name was Bernardhad interested her very much.“I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I dont see what
28、he can do.”After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could help him to earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering so much.”“So do I,” said Harry. “We really should do something to assist them.”For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he s
29、prang to his feet and cried,“I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish (完成).”The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. “I tell you what we can do,” said John. “You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? W
30、ell, we can make popcorn(爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”注意:续写词数应为150左右。When Mrs. Meredith heard of Johns idea, she thought it was a good one, too. With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. 答案When Mrs. Meredith heard o
31、f Johns idea, she thought it was a good one, too. John quickly assigned tasks to Clara and Harry. They went to the local grocery and bought a popcorn machine and some paper bags while John prepared some ingredients like sugar, honey and oil. Soon, they made a large amount of popcorn and put it in pa
32、per bags. They rushed to Bernards home and told him their idea. His face lit up when he heard the news, and his family was very grateful.With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. “What if we cant sell it?” said Bernard anxiously. “No worries. We will give it a shot,” replied Jo
33、hn in confidence. They took the popcorn around the house, and fortunately, people were willing to buy it. For a while, the popcorn was sold out. Bernard earned lots of money. Mrs. Meredith and her children then taught him how to make popcorn. Bernard did not forget the help from the Meredith family,
34、 and he passed the kindness to those in need. (153 words)Writing 4阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico
35、. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dads friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us to his farm.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guest room of the farmhouse listening to the fr
36、ogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impr
37、essed by my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool. In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our hors
38、es, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Dont be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you dont get lost!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farmhouse were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep
39、 green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意:续写词数应为150左右。Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. We had no idea where we were and it got dark. 答案Suddenly a little
40、 rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. I held the horse tightly and pulled him to the left to avoid the little rabbit. I managed to keep balance on the horse. All of a sudden the horse began to run. The speed was so fast that my father nearly failed to keep pace with us. For a few minutes my horse
41、 slowed down to a trot and then stopped beside a river. I looked around and realized that we were far away from the track.We had no idea where we were and it got dark. All we could hear was the sound of wandering water. Luckily the stars came out and gave us a little light when we were looking for t
42、he way back. After what must have been several hours, we found we actually went around in circles. We suddenly saw a dim light shooting from afar. My dad and I both rode our horses towards the light. As we got closer, we saw Uncle Paul with a big searchlight waving to us. It was indeed a vacation th
43、at I had never experienced before. (167 words)Writing 5阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Its not that high,” my courageous brother said. As soon as I stood near the base of the climb, my instructor attached his harness(保护带). He assisted me with mine and reassured me that I was perfectly secure in the harness. My mind recalled when we had to sign papers explaining that it was our fault if we died, and now part of me didnt trust him. As I stared at the cliff side, it seemed to weave like a loom(织布机), and it made a maze(迷宫).
