1、曲一线 2023版5年高考3年模拟B版题型五 应用文写作Writing 1 (2022全国甲)你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.海洋的重要性;2.保护海洋的倡议。注意:1.词数100左右;2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。Our Oceans, Our ResponsibilityJune 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day.答案One possible version:Our Oceans, Our ResponsibilityJune 8th was
2、officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day. It aims to raise peoples awareness of protecting oceans.Why should we protect the ocean? The reason is that it provides various benefits. To begin with, the sea is a significant source of food. With the world population growing, we are relying
3、on the ocean more and more for survival. In addition, not only does the ocean produce much oxygen, but it also absorbs much carbon dioxide, which remarkably contributes to regulating the Earths climate. Also,vast amounts of medicinal products come from the ocean, including ingredients that help figh
4、t cancer and heart disease.However, the sea is being damaged. Huge as it is, it is more sensitive than we think. Thus, it is high time that we took effective measures to protect it. Otherwise, future generations will not forgive us. 精彩语句1.精美词汇significant adj.有重大意义的sensitive adj.敏感的vast amounts of 大量
5、的2.出彩结构In addition, not only does the ocean produce much oxygen, but it also absorbs much carbon dioxide, which remarkably contributes to regulating the Earths climate. (倒装;定语从句)Thus, it is high time that we took effective measures to protect it.(it is high time+that从句)Writing 2 (2022全国乙)学校英文报正在开展以L
6、earning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.学习活动状况描述;2.简单评论;3.你的建议。注意:1.词数100左右;2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。Learning English Beyond the ClassroomThere are many things we can do to learn English well. 答案One possible version:Learning English Beyond the ClassroomThere are many things we can
7、 do to learn English well. To learn more about how senior high school students learn English after class, recently our school English newspaper is holding a heated discussion, whose theme is “Learning English Beyond the Classroom”. The following are the results of a survey connected to the discussio
8、n.The percentage of students who choose to listen to English songs and watch English movies is respectively 65% and 50%, while those choosing to read books in English and browse English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.From what has been said above, we can safely draw a conclusion that
9、 most students prefer to choose more relaxing and interesting ways to learn English beyond the classroom.As far as I am concerned, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing after school, we will learn English well.精彩语句From what has been said above, we can safely draw a conclusio
10、n that most students prefer to choose more relaxing and interesting ways to learn English beyond the classroom.(what引导宾语从句,作介词From的宾语;that引导同位语从句;to learn English beyond the classroom为不定式短语作后置定语)Writing 3 (2021全国甲)假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括:1.阐明写
11、信事由;2.征求建议;3.表示感谢。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案One possible version:Dear Chris,Its been a long time since we last met. How is everything? Im kind of busy recently, for our school is planning to hold a class meeting with the theme of introducing traditional Chinese culture. Meanwhile, the activit
12、y will be posted on an English website. I was appointed to take charge of this activity, which worries me a lot.Faced with difficulties, I have to turn to you for help. Since you have always been interested in Chinese culture, I sincerely hope that you can tell me what traditional Chinese culture at
13、tracts you foreigners most and why. I know its not an easy question to answer, but any advice from you will be of great help in accomplishing my task.I would appreciate it if you could give me any idea. I am looking forward to receiving your earliest reply.Yours,Li Hua精彩语句Faced with difficulties, I
14、have to turn to you for help.(Faced with.为过去分词短语作状语,意为“面临着”)I would appreciate it if you could give me any idea.(I would appreciate it if you could.为虚拟条件句,意为“如果你能,我将不胜感激”)Writing 4 (2021全国乙)你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:1.分析优势与不足;2.提出学习建议。注意:1.词数100左右;2.题目和首句已为你写好。Be smart o
15、nline learnersLearning online has become an important way to study recently.答案One possible version:Be smart online learnersLearning online has become an important way to study recently. Students have easier access to more materials in their favor. Besides, there is no limit to learning time and spac
16、e, which brings great convenience to all learners. However, some students who lack selfdiscipline may find their minds wandering when facing a screen rather than the faces of their teachers. I benefit a lot from online learning, and for those who hope so too, my following suggestions will be helpful
17、. First, put down learning tasks in detail before you start. Then, tick what you have achieved and rearrange those you havent. Finally, set aside 10 minutes to have a break if you find it hard to focus on what youre learning. Keep it in mind that distraction should be dealt with wisely. Thats all. T
18、hank you for your attention.增分亮点文章中长短句错落安排,长句中定语从句、宾语从句运用合理。短语如 have easier access to, bring great convenience to, find their minds wandering, put down, set aside 等使语言丰满有节奏感。Writing 5(2021浙江6月卷)昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿,内容包括:1.展览时间、地点;2.观展感受;3.推荐观展。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案One possible
19、version:Aiming to enrich students school life and stimulate interest in traditional culture, our school has decided to hold an exhibition of traditional Chinese paintings in our stadium.As scheduled, the exhibition lasts 7 days, from March 8 to 14, during which a wide variety of our students works a
20、bout different subjects are on display. Frankly speaking, the moment I entered the hall, I was spellbound by their fantastic works. Furthermore, the professional narration enabled me to have a deep understanding of the Chinese paintings.So meaningful and fascinating is the exhibition that I strongly
21、 recommend anyone who has a passion for traditional Chinese paintings should come to experience it in person. Writing 6(2021天津)假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家,他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业,并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复,内容包括: (1)表示感谢并问候;(2)计划与家人一起做的事情;(3)你决定选择哪个专业,为学好该专业做何准备。注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充
22、实、行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Nancy,Yours,Li Jin答案写作提示1.本文为回信,也是一封告知信,要注意书信格式及告知信特点;2.主要采用第一人称,时态以一般现在时为主;3.首段感谢对方来信问候,引出正文内容;第二段描述自己的假期计划;第三段告知对方自己大学专业的选择及准备。参考范文Dear Nancy,Im glad to hear from you. And thank you very much for asking about my vacation arrangements and future plans.Since
23、this summer vacation is my last one in high school, my family and I have already made a travel plan. We are going to take a trip to Tibet. Tibet lies on the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau of the southwest border of China, which is a place I have been longing for. This time I finally have a chance to realize
24、my dream. After graduating from high school, I will be faced with the choice of university and university major. You know I have always been interested in languages, so I plan to major in languages, preferably English, if possible. I also plan to improve my oral English by studying online during the
25、 vacation. I hope to visit you again if the COVID-19 situation gets better.Best wishes!Yours,Li Jin评析1.范文内容完整,要点齐全,比例合适。主题句和支撑细节一一对应,衔接词的使用让文章逻辑清晰,条理分明。2.用词分析(1)be faced with.比face高级;(2)major in.为常用短语。Writing 7(2021天津春)假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了最美中华栏目,请你给该栏目投稿,介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括:(1)该地方的基本情
26、况(如名称、地理位置等);(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等);(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。注意:(1)词数不少于 100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。A Beautiful Place in ChinaMarch 19, 2021 By Li Jin 答案写作提示1.主要人称为第三人称;主体时态为一般现在时。2.第一段介绍写作背景;第二段介绍地方特色;第三段介绍你对当地的印象和感受。One possible version:A Beautiful Place in ChinaMarch 19, 2021 By Li JinWith the vast landmass, Ch
27、ina owns diverse landscapes scattered in the east, west, north and south, including mountains, rivers, lakes, prairies, forest and quiet towns.However, it may not be so easy for foreign tourists to pick some of them as travel destinations.Well, here I would like to recommend a beautiful placemy home
28、townTianjin.Tianjin is located to the east of Hebei province, at the northeastern of the North China Plain.After Shanghai and Beijing, it is the third largest municipality of China.It is also the most important manufacturing centre and the leading port of North China.Tianjin is a good choice as a tr
29、avel destination.With its cool sea breeze and fresh sea air you will definitely feel refreshed.Historical relics, natural scenery, temples, churches, assembly halls and commemorative sites of the Chinese revolution will illuminate Tianjins past, present and future.With its delicious food and friendl
30、y people, Tianjin is a beautiful city worth a visit.精彩语句1.精美词汇diverse adj.多样的destination n.目的地municipality n.直辖市manufacturing centre 制造业中心2.出彩结构With the vast landmass, China owns diverse landscapes scattered in the east, west, north and south, including mountains, rivers, lakes, prairies, forest and
31、 quiet towns.(with结构作伴随状语,scattered in the east.为过去分词短语作后置定语)Writing 8(2020全国)你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:1.人物简介;2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意:1.词数100左右;2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。The person I respectThere are many respectable people around us.答案One possible version:The person I respectThere are many respectable
32、people around us. As for me, my father is the one I respect. He is a doctor and always takes a positive attitude towards life. There are various reasons why I admire him. As a doctor, he is devoted to his job, saying “Nothing is more important than saving a life, however difficult it is.” In March,
33、he volunteered to go to Wuhan, determined to help those suffering from COVID19 despite the risk of being infected, which made me promote the understanding of bravery and responsibility. As a father, not only does he care about my life, but he also inspires me to set a high aim and strive for it. But
34、 for his encouragement, I couldnt have made so much progress.Such is my father, a great man who sets a good example for me and I love him a great deal. 精彩语句第二段中关系代词which引导的定语从句、not only引起的倒装句、含有but for的虚拟语气,第三段中的倒装句“Such is my father”和关系代词who引导的定语从句都充分展示了作者对复杂句式的把控能力;第二段中动词的非谓语形式saying和determined作状语
35、、saving.和being infected作宾语以及suffering.作定语展示了作者对非谓语形式灵活运用的能力;take a positive attitude towards.“对采取积极的态度”和promote the understanding of “增加对的理解”是高级词汇,展示了作者较高的语言功底。Writing 9 (2020全国)上周末,你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文,介绍这次活动,内容包括:1.农场情况;2.采摘过程;3.个人感受。注意:1.词数100左右;2.题目已为你写好。题目:My Weekend答案One possible versio
36、n:My WeekendI went on a gathering with my classmates last weekend, which definitely was an enjoyable experience.We arrived at the farm that enjoys a good reputation for its organic products early in the morning. We walked through the bushes and looked for fruits and vegetables with the guidance of t
37、he workers. I picked them happily with my friends. In the end, all of us not only gained various fresh and tasty fruits, but also had a knowledge of green food.Theres no denying that this was a fantastic experience and I do hope to go there once again.精彩语句1.精美词汇definitely adv.确切地;确实reputation n.名誉or
38、ganic adj.有机的guidance n.指导;引导tasty adj.美味的2.出彩结构I went on a gathering with my classmates last weekend, which definitely was an enjoyable experience.(which引导非限制性定语从句)We arrived at the farm that enjoys a good reputation for its organic products.(that引导定语从句)Writing 10 (2020全国)假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给
39、外教Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:1.剧情简介;2.指导内容;3.商定时间地点。注意:1.词数100左右;2.结束语已为你写好。Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua答案One possible version:Dear Miss Evans,How is everything going these days? I am Li Hua. I, together with my classmates, have adapted a short play from the text The Neckla
40、ce, but we meet with some trouble. Now, I am writing to ask you to give us some guidance.As we all know, in the story Mathilde Loisel dreamed of a wealthy lifestyle but her vain obsession ended up with her lifetime of misery and despair, ruining her life. However, we find it extremely hard to use pr
41、oper tone to speak the lines, which has annoyed us for quite a long time. Hopefully you would be so kind as to give us some help on this problem.If its convenient for you, lets meet at 8:30 on Sunday morning in the school theatre. We would appreciate it if you could do us a favor. Looking forward to
42、 your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua精彩语句1.精美词汇adapt v.改编obsession n.痴迷end up with.以告终misery n.悲惨,痛苦despair n.绝望2.出彩结构However, we find it extremely hard to use proper tone to speak the lines, which has annoyed us for quite a long time.(it为形式宾语,to use.为真正的宾语;which引导非限制性定语从句)Writing 11(2020浙江)假定你是李华,你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1.询问近况;2.分享班级最新消息;3.表达祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。