1、作文要高分，就找一等文2021年一等文英语作文2021年一等文英语作文考研考研英语一大作文培优&VIP模板英语一大作文培优&VIP模板密训课密训课主讲：Jade老师contents目录模板思路模板思路1234看图方法看图方法描图方法描图方法主题归纳主题归纳图画写作图画写作Directions:Directions:Write an essay of about 200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay,you should1.describe the picture1.describe the picture,2.interp
2、ret its meaning,and3.give your comment on the phenomenon.模板思路:积极模板思路:积极第一段：（1-3）3句 引出话题+描图句+提出主旨 第二段：（4-8）5句 论证积极现象产生的影响第三段：（9-11）3句 解决方案模板思路：消极模板思路：消极第一段：（1-3）3句 引出话题+描图句+提出主旨 第二段：（4-8）5句 解释消极现象形成的原因第三段：（9-11）3句 解决方案看图方法看图方法第一步：学会看图第二步：描图方法学会看图：积极 消极依据图画内容+下方文字，2020201920182017201620152014 相 携2013选
3、 择20122011描图方法描图方法第一段第二句空白处：填入1-2句的描图句。A人物/事物的动作状态B人物/事物的动作状态 2020描图方法描图方法 Two different work habits are shown a young man tends to finish her job as early as possible,but the other does not act until the deadline.描图方法描图方法2018描图方法描图方法 Two different reading habits are shown a young man possesses a va
4、st array of books but does not read anyone,but the other is dedicated to reading one book,planning to finish 20 books this year.2017描图方法描图方法 A student is choosing his courses one course is characterized by new knowledge,focusing on creativity and being difficult to learn while the other course high
5、score，getting easy to pass and less homework.2016描图方法描图方法 Two different fathers are shown a father is watching TV and smoking，but demands his son to study hard；the other father and his son are dedicated to studying together，both concentrated and devoted.2011描图方法描图方法 A couple of visitors are enjoying
6、 the view on a boat,throwing their rubbish into the lake at their will.Therefore,an amount of refuse floats on the water and destroys the natural landscape.2012描图方法描图方法 A couple of persons face one bottle of spilt one bottle of spilt water water but show extremely different thoughts one is optimisti
7、c/happy but the other pessimistic/sad.the same terrible situation Two different states of mind are shown one is optimistic but the other pessimistic when they face the same terrible situation.2007描图方法描图方法 A couple of football players face their their own life tasksown life tasks and show the same th
8、oughts both of them undervalue themselves and overvalue others.主题归纳主题归纳根据描图内容，选择方向方向：积极 or 消极方法：提炼升华 最完美的主题P1s1 p1s3P2 P3 空白处主题归纳主题归纳年份 图画 主题年份 图画 主题11年 旅程之“余”破坏环境12年 乐观悲观 保持乐观13年 选择 合理规划未来14年 相携 关爱家人15年 手机时代的“聚会”沉迷手机16年 与其只提要求，不如做榜样 树立良好榜样17年 选课进行时 培养良好的学习态度18年 “有书”与“读书”培养良好的学习习惯19年 在途中 坚持到底20年 习惯
9、培养良好的做事习惯主题归纳主题归纳年份 主题年份 主题11年 破坏环境 polluting/destroying environment12年 保持乐观 staying optimistic13年 合理规划未来 rational planning for the future14年 关爱家人 caring for the family15年 沉迷手机 addiction to mobile phones16年 树立良好榜样 setting a role model17年 培养良好的学习态度 developing good study attitudes18年 培养良好的学习习惯 develop
10、ing good study habits19年 坚持到底 keeping persistent 20年 培养良好的做事习惯 developing good work habits 句子提升句子提升S5 原因或影响句句子，especially in the aspect of 相关具体内容（名词或动名词词组）.10 especially in the aspect of enriching cultural life.11 especially in the aspect of throwing waste and refuse recklessly.句子提升句子提升12 especially
11、 in the aspect of overcoming hardship and difficulty.13 especially in the aspect of personal future development.14 especially in the aspect of domestic relationship.句子提升句子提升15 especially in the aspect of personal relationship.16 especially in the aspect of family education.17/18 especially in the as
12、pect of work and study.句子提升句子提升19/12 especially in the aspect of overcoming hardship and difficulty.20 especially in the aspect of daily life and study.句子提升句子提升S10 措施句积极:句子，such as+拒绝+主题词的反向词。12年 保持乐观such as refusing to become a pessimistic person13年 合理规划未来 such as refusing to irrationally plan our
13、future14年 关爱家人 such as refusing to ignore our family members 句子提升句子提升16年 树立良好榜样 such as refusing to be an undesirable role model17年 培养良好的学习态度 such as refusing to develop bad study attitude18年 培养良好的学习习惯such as refusing to cultivate bad study attitude句子提升句子提升19年 坚持到底such as refusing to give up on the
14、half way20年 培养良好的做事习惯such as refusing to develop bad work habits 句子提升句子提升S10 个人措施句消极句句子，such as+being a good example of+主题词的反向词.11年 破坏环境 such as being a good example of protecting environment.15年沉迷手机such as being a good example of developing self-control.句子提升句子提升S10 个人措施句消极句句子，such as+being a good e
15、xample who +主题词的反向词.17年 养成不良的学习态度18年 养成不良的学习习惯20年 养成不良的做事习惯such as becoming a good example who has good study habits/attitudes/work habits总结总结1.第一段第二句空白处：填入1-2句的描图句2.第一段S1S3、第二、三段空白处：主题词3.第二段S5，第三段S10：句子，+具体改写内容客服电话：400-6018-688客服电话：400-6018-688新浪微博：一等文新浪微博：一等文官网：官网：考 试 要 高 分考 试 要 高 分就 找 一 等 文就 找 一 等 文