1、添加微信：car4900，免费领小学资料第20讲写作指导一小六英语写作技巧一、用介词短语替代从句例：原句：While they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning.修改后：During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning.原句：When you come to the second traffic light, turn right.修改后：At the second traffic light turn left.二、
2、删除诸如who is”或that is之类的关系代词，变从句为短例：句：The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages.修改后：The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages.注：把句中的three parts改用形容词来表达，节省了四个不必要的单词which is written in。我们经常可以将关系代词如that去掉，这只会引起最少的变动。三、剔除你不需要的单词例：Two joint p
3、artners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call.写完这样的句子后，你自己再读一遍，挑出单词joint和telephone，注意删去不必要的词。1、 重点教学作文审题的过程和技巧2、 难点教学如何通过学习深入作文。(1)以“My friend and I”为题按下面的要求写一篇英语小作文。要求：1.语句通顺，条理清楚，书写清晰、规范。2.不得少于50个单词。【要领点评】写法：这篇作文的题目是“我的朋友和我”。既然写作范围是两个人物，就要笔墨均匀，两者缺一不可。不能只描写朋友，也不能只叙述我。这无形中增加了写
4、作的难度。解决这个难点的关键是：找出两个人几方面的异同。可以通过常见的年龄、身高、体重、外貌、喜好等方面列举出每个人的具体实际情况，再进行比较，通过比较突出每个人物的特点。这样就把人物活灵活现的展现给读者了。时态：像此类题目的作文，运用一般现在时即可。句型：因为涉及两个人的比较，不要忘记使用比较级句型：A+be+比较级+than+B。注意：在列举两个人的“体貌、喜好”等方面情况时，应一边列举，一边比较。不要一味指出不同，还要列举相同之处。两人能成为朋友，一定有共同语言和喜好，共性不容忽视。在表达喜好时，不同的句型应交叉运用，避免枯燥的重复。例“Our favorite colors are”，
5、“We like best”, “We both like,too”, 为突出不同时间做不同运动, 用“On Saturdays”，“On Sundays”，形成鲜明对比。常使用并列连词and 和转折连词 but ，使文章读起来更流畅。结尾以How happy we are!突出了两人从友谊中得到的快乐！参考例文：My friend and IIve got a lovely friend at school. His name is Jack. Jack is 12 years old now. Im 11. Hes older than me. Hes 150 cm tall. Im 14
6、8 cm. Hes taller and stronger. Hes 43 kg and Im 41 kg. Hes heavier. Weve got round faces and short hair. But my eyes are bigger and my legs are longer. Our favoritecolors are white and blue. We like summer best. We both like sports, too. On Saturdays, we play table tennis. On Sundays, we play basket
7、ball. Hes good at basketball. But I do better at table tennis. We laugh and play together. How happy we are! （2）以“A Bad Cold”为题按下面的要求写一篇英语小作文。要求：1.语句通顺，条理清楚，书写清晰、规范。2.不得少于50个单词。【要领点评】写法：这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙了得病、病的症状、服药及治疗的全过程。写出了小作者希望快点康复，好去上学的愿望。时态：这篇文章可以采用一般现在时来写。如果主语是第三人称单数，动词别忘加s。句型：要用feel 加形容词，和表示“患某种疾
8、病”的用法“have+表示的疾病的单词”。注意：在表示疾病时，可以使用-ache,hurt 和sore。不要只用一个单词，以避免枯燥。要写出得病后的简单治疗及心情，不能只写得病的情况。常见病句：My nose is hurt。因为be后面要加形容词，而hurt是动词，因此应使用sore；东西放在床上要用on the bed。生病，是卧床不起，应该说stay in bed。表示吃药时，通过用take some medicine，不用eat。参考例文：A Bad Cold Im not feeling well today. I think I have a bad cold. I have a
9、headache. I have a fever. My nose hurts. My throat is sore. I have to take some medicine and stay in bed. My parents will take me to the hospital. What a bad cold!I hope I can be better soon. And I want to go to school（3）以“Zooms Weekend”为题按要求写一篇英语小作文。要求：1.要详细写出此周末的主要活动。2.条理清楚，意思连贯，标点正确，书写规范。3.不少于50个
10、单词。【要领点评】写法：这篇习作是按时间顺序记叙了Zoom的周末活动。时态：这篇文章可以用三种时态来写，由于本单元主要讲的是一般过去时态，所以我们采用一般过去时态比较合适。句型：主语+动词过去式+过去时间。注意：活动的相关表达法采用新旧知识结合的方法，但要注意动词过去式的拼写。参考例文：Zooms WeekendZoom had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, he washed his clothes and went to a park. He did his homework and went fishing on Saturday aftern
11、oon. On Sunday morning, he cleaned his room and visited his grandparents. He played football and watch TV on Sunday afternoon. Zoom was too tired. .A以一种文具为题按要求写一篇英语小作文。要求：1.要写出此文具的主要特点。2.条理清楚，意思连贯，标点正确，书写规范。3.不少于50个单词。参考例文：MyPencil-boxIhaveapencil-box.Itisniceandbig.Ithasmanycolours.Therearetwoblock
12、sonmypencil-box.Oneisyellow,theotherisorange.Inmypencil-box,therearepens,pencils,arulerandaneraser.Ilikemypencil-boxverymuchandmypencil-boxlookslikemybestfriend.B以“Myself”（我）为题按下面的要求写一篇英语小作文。要求：1.语句通顺，条理清楚，书写清晰、规范。2.不得少于50个单词。参考例文：MyselfMynameisWangDong.Im12yearsold.ImastudentofNo.5PrimarySchoolinBe
13、ijing.Ihavemanyhobbies.IlikereadingandwatchingTVinmyfreetime.SnowWhiteismyfavouritebook. Ihavesomefriendsinmyclass.MybestfriendisChenGang.Ioftenplaygameswithhim.MyEnglishteacherisMissHu.Ilikeherverymuch.(1)以“My Trip”为题按下面的要求写一篇英语作文。要求：1.意思连贯，词句通顺，标点正确，书写规范。2.不少于50个单词。参考例文：My Trip Japan was fun. It w
14、as very cool and windy. We flew kites in the park. I bought a watch there. I wanted to buy more, but I didnt have money. The gardens there were beautiful. I liked them the best. The department stores were too big. I couldnt find Mom. The food was delicious. We ate a lot of fish, and I also liked the
15、 vegetables and cake there. I hope I can go to Japan one more time. (2)以自己最喜欢的宠物为题按下面的要求写一篇英语作文。要求：1.意思连贯，词句通顺，标点正确，书写规范。2.不少于50个单词。参考例文：I have a cat .It is a lovely cat. Her name is Lucy .Her fur is black and white. She is my best friend. I like her very much. I often tell stories to her. I think s
16、he can understand me. Because she jumps up with the joy when I tell her stories （1）以你自己的宠物或你熟悉的小动物为题按下面的要求写一篇英语作文。要求：1.意思连贯，词句通顺，标点正确，书写规范。2.不少于50个单词。参考例文：MydogIhaveanEnglishdog.ItsnameisLaike.Itstwoyearsold.Itsgrey.Itsbodyisverylong.Itsmouthiswhite.Itstwoeyesareblue.Ithastwosmallears.Itsfourlegsare
17、verylong.Itstailisthinandlong.Itrunsfast.Itlikesmeat.Iliketoplaywithit.Itsmygoodfriend.(2 )以MyBedroom(我的卧室)为题按要求写一篇英语小作文。要求：1.要写出卧室内的主要物品。2.条理清楚，语句通顺，标点正确，书写规范。3.不少于50个单词。参考例文：MyBedroomIhaveabigbedroom.Therearemanythingsinit.Thereisabigdeskinthemiddleoftheroom.Therearesomebooks,acomputer,akeyboardan
18、dmouseonit.Theresapencil-boxandalamponit,too.Nearthedesk,theresabed.Nearthebed,thereisabigwardrobe.Therearetwowindowsinthewall.Therearefourpicturesandaniceclockonthewall,too.Ioftencleanmybedroom.Ilovemybedroom（3）以MyDay（我的一天）为题按要求写一篇英语小作文。要求：1.有一定的内容，条理清楚，语句通顺，书写规范。2.不少于50个单词。参考例文：MyDayImaboy,andImap
19、upil.IgotoschoolfromMondaytoFriday.IhavenoclassonSaturdaysandSundays.Ioftengetupatsixoclock.Igotoschoolatsevenoclock.Ihavefourlessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Igohomeatfive.Idomyhomeworkathome.2.阅读Buying a ticketWang Bin is a football fan. There is a football match between Chinese team and Am
20、erican team. He wants to watch it. He comes to the box office(售票处) and gives the clerk 10 yuan. The clerk says,“please give me another 10 yuan. The price(价格) of a ticket is 20 yuan.”“Why?” says Wang Bin, I just watch Chinese team. I dont want to watch the other team at all. Do you want me to buy a t
21、icket for them? No, no, no”根据短文内容选择正确答案。( )1. How does Wang Bin like football?A. Little.B. A little. C. Very. D. Very much.( )2. Can you guess the meaning of “clerk” in the passage?A. 商人B. 老板C. 买主D. 售票员( )3. Can Wang Bin buy a ticket with 10 yuan?A. Yes, he can.B. Yes, he does.C. No, he cant.D. No, he doesnt.( )4.“Do you want me to buy a ticket for them?” The word “them” refers toA. Chinese teamB. British teamC. American teamD. French team( )5. Can Wang Bin watch the match?A. Yes, he will.B. Yes, he can.C. No, he cant.D. No, he wontKeys: 1-5. DDDCC添加微信：car4900，免费领小学资料
