1、2022写作专项班作、作结构1.解释图表/描述图表2.给出评论：分析原因；展望未来（建议，素材）、图表作类型1.趋势类：有数据变化多是过去式2.状态类：没有状态变化多是般现在时三、审题三要素1.图表表头表头=关键词+年份2.数据变化/占increase/decrease/remain stable3.数据含义四、图表作句作法开头段：描述图表段1.如图所示2.数据趋势3.数据具体描述4.数据趋势，具体描述主体段：分析原因段5.分析原因6.原因7.原因8.原因三结尾段：展望未来段9.综上所述10.展望未来五、数据描述：（）数据趋势：1.上升动词 rise,increase,climb,grow名词
2、：rise,increase,growth动词：surge,rocket 快速上升2.下降动词：fall,decrease,decline名词：decrease,fall动词：slump 快速下降3.平稳：remain stable；stay constant（）数据程度：1.幅度副词：greatly/dramatically/sharply/significantly形容词：great/sharp/dramatic/significant2.幅度中等副词：steadily/moderately/形容词：steady/moderate3.幅度副词：sightly/minimally形容词：sl
3、ight/minimal（三）数值The number/figure/statistic/percentage（四）举例1.该数据增迅速The number increased dramatically.There was a dramatic increase in the number.2.该数据，只有很少的下降The figure declined minimally.There was a minimal decline in the number.六、图表作描述（）开头段：1.As is vividly shown in the above chart,正如上述这幅图表所清晰展示地那
4、样As is clearly indicated in the above bar chart,it demonstrates thatsome remarkable changes have taken place with regard to xxx.with regard to xxx 关于表头Intuitively,the chart is compelling,and it explains how popular thissocial phenomenon is.直观来看，这幅图表是很有说服的，且它也解释了这种社会现象的就程度。2.Based on the data provide
5、d,one can see that the number of A1increased sharply.Judging from the data provided,one can see that the number of A1decreased moderately.Based on the data provided,one can see that the proportion/numberof A1 ranks first,with the highest percentage of xxx.基于所给数据，我们可以得知 A1 的例位于第，占了最的份额。4.Meanwhile,th
6、ere was a slight decrease in the number of A2.meanwhile/simultaneously 与此同时there was a slight decrease in the number of A2.A2的数据，存在个轻微的下降It is followed by A2,xx2,A3,xx3 and A4,xx4 respectively.紧随其后的是 A2,A3和 A4,分别占 xx2%,xx3%和 xx4%.（）主体段5.Instead of just casting a glance at the chart,we are supposed t
7、oprobe into the root cause behind the phenomenon.instead of A,B不是 A 是 Bprobe into the root causes behind the phenomenon 探究现象背后的根本原因We are very likely to ask what may account for this noteworthyphenomenon.In my opinion,there are many factors at play.there are many factors at play 有个因素在起作6.常的原因功能句A co
8、ntributes to BA 是 B 的原因A is responsible for BA 是 B 的原因A also play a role in the process在过程中，A 也发挥作/A 也是原因常的分析度the development of xxxthe favourable condition they enjoy 他们所享有的良好的现状（积极）the challenging problems they suffer 他们所遭受的有挑战的问题（消极）traditions and customers 传统和习俗outlook of the world,society and l
9、ife 世界观，社会观和活观lifestyles of people concerned 有关的活式（三）展望未来段9.considering what has been argued so far,综上所述Judging from what has been mentioned above,综上所述I can easily come to this conclusion that the tendency/situation isnormal and positive.我可以容易地得出这个结论，该趋势/现状是正常且积极的.I can easily come to this conclusio
10、n that the tendency/situation isnormal but negative.我可以容易地得出结论，该趋势/现状是正确但是消极的。10.Without further changes,there is no reason to expect(that)itwould not continue in the foreseeable future.没有进步的改变，没有理由期待，它在可以预的未来，不会继续下去.Considering what has been argued so far,whether it is positive ornegative,one thing
11、 is certain that it is bound to continue in theforeseeable future.whether it is positive or negative 不论是积极的还是消极的七、描述图表段1.There was a 程度/趋势 in the number of xx,from 数字 in 年份.数据描述的功能句1.there be 趋势2.趋势 occurred3.The number 趋势4.年份 saw a 趋势2.1.Intuitively,the bat chart is compelling,and it explains how p
12、opular thissocial phenomenon is.Intuitively,the bar chart is compelling,and it explains how profoundlymobile-phone has affected peoples daily life.It shows clearly that some remarkable changes have taken place withregard to Mobile-phone subscriptions.2.Based on the data provided,one can see that the
13、 number ofmobile-phone subscriptions in developing countries increased sharply.the number increased sharplyJudging from the data provided,one can see that a sharp increaseoccurred in the number of mobile-phone subscriptions has been on asharp increase.a sharp increase occurredBased on the data provi
14、ded,one can see that the number ofmobile-phone subscriptions has been on a sharp increase.the number has been on a sharp increaseBased on the data provided,one can see that the years from 2000 to2008 saw a sharp increase in the number of mobile-phone subscriptionsin developing countries.the years fr
15、om 2000 to 2008 saw a sharp increase3.In the year of 2000,the number was just 0.4 billion,but within only 8years.4.Meanwhile,a slight increase occurred in the number of developedcountries,from 0.6 billion in 2000 to 1 billion in 2008.Meanwhile,there was a slight growth concerned with the number ofmo
16、bile-phone subscriptions in the developed countries,from 0.6billion in2000 to 1 billion in 2008.3.Intuitively,the line chart is compelling,and it explains how popularthis social phenomenon is.It shows clearly that some remarkablechanges have taken place with regard to the number of museums andvisito
17、r in China from 2013 to 2015.Based on the data provided,one cansee that the years from 2013to 2015saw a sharp increase in the number ofvisitors.In the year of 2013，the number was 637.8 million,but within 2years,it increased dramatically to 781.1 million.During the same period,there was a moderate in
18、crease in the number of museums,from 4165 in2013 to 4697 in 2015.Based on the data provided,one can the see that a moderateincrease occurred in the number of visitors.In the year of 2013,it was 4163,but within only 2years,in the year of 2015,it increased to 4697.Meanwhile,there was a significant inc
19、rease in the number of visitors,from 637.8million in 2013 to 781.4 million in 2015.描述：1.there be 趋势（名词）2.趋势（名词）occurred3.the number 趋势4.年份 saw a 趋势（名词）4.欣赏景：enjoy the beauty of the nature缓解压：ease/relieve the pressures交朋友：make friends培养独能：develop/cultivate independence排名第的例是：ranks first with the high
20、est percentage of xx接下来：it is followed by在被调查的学中：among the students surveyed某校学旅游的调查：travel purposes among the students surveyed inone university1.Admittedly,the pie chart is intuitively compelling,and it explains howpopular this social phenomenon is.The chart clearly shows the purposesof travel amo
21、ng the students surveyed in one certain university.admittedly诚然；intuitively本能地，直觉上地；compelling具有说服2.Based on the data provided,one can see that enjoying the beauty ofscience spots ranks first,with the highest percentage of 37.4.And it is followed by relieving the pressure,accounting for 33%,making f
22、riends,9%,developing independence,6%,and others,15%respectively.状态类图表描述框架：版本：Admittedly,the pie chart is compelling,and it is explains how popularthis social phenomenon is.The chart shows 表头.Based on the dataprovided,one can see A1 ranks first,with the highest percentage of xx1.Andit is followed by
23、A2,xx2,A3,xx3,And A4,xx4 respectively.版本：Admittedly,the pie chart is compelling,and it is explains how popularthis social phenomenon is.The chart shows 表头.To be specific,thepercentage of A1,A2,A3,and A4 is xx1,xx2,xx3,and xx4 respectively.(Not)Surprisingly,enjoying the beauty is the largest share.5.
24、表头：money spent during Chinese New Year expense during the SpringFestival in one certain city数据占：40%is the largest share/part ranks first数据含义：new years gifts/transport;party and dinning otherAdmittedly,the pie chart is intuitively compelling,and it explains howpopular this social phenomenon is.The ch
25、art clearly shows the expenseduring the Spring Festival.Based on the data provided,one can see that thenumber of new years gifts ranks first,with the highest percentage of 40.Andit is followed by transport,accounting for 20%,party and dinning,20%,others,20%respectively.、给出原因段万能分析原因：development;lifes
26、tyle分析原因，常功能句：A contributes to BA is responsible for BA also play a role分析原因：原因必备功能句+常分析度1.the development of xx2.the challenging problems3.the favorable condition4.the lifestyle of people concerned5.traditions and custom6.outlook of the world,society,and life1.Instead of just casting a glance at th
27、e bar chart,we are supposed toprobe into the causes behind the phenomenon.We are very likely to ask whatmay account for the noteworthy phenomenon.In my opinion,there are manyfactors at play.what can be the contributing factors behind this noteworthy phenomenon什么才是这个值得注意的现象背后的原因what may account for t
28、he noteworthy phenomenon 什么可以解释这个值得注意的现象At the very beginning,as we have witnessed,during the past decades,the developing countries have advanced greatly in all aspects,and thus,personal per capita disposable income increased significantly as well.In myopinion,that is the root cause behind the pheno
29、menon,in that a sharplyincreasing number of people living in developing countries can afford to buya mobile phone.Whats more,the lifestyles of people living there are alsoresponsible for it.Considering what has been argued so far,we can safelycome to this conclusion that the situation is normal and
30、positive.And I firmlybelieve that it is bound to continue in the years to come./Considering whathas been argued so far,whether it is positive Or negative,one thing iscertain that it is bound to continue in the foreseeable future.personal per capita disposable income个可配收2.1.the developmentChina has a
31、dvanced greatly in all aspects particularly culture sectorsthe need for better life increased markedly as well2.the lifestyleDeeper their understanding of Chinese rich history and cultureGain an insight intoInstead of just casting a glance at the line chart,we are supposed toprobe into the root caus
32、ed behind this noteworthy phenomenon.We are verylikely to ask what may account for it.In my opinion,there are many factors atplay.At the very beginning,as we have witnessed,during the past decades,China has advanced greatly in all aspects,particularly in cultural sectors.What more,the lifestyles of
33、ordinary Chinese are also responsible for it,inthat an increasing number of people are more willing to visit museums inorder to gain an insight into the rich history and culture of our country.In short,Chinas development in recent decades deserves applausefrom all over the world.总之，中国在近年的发展，值得赢得来世界的
34、掌声China has advanced greatly in all aspects,particularly in cultural sectors.中国在各领域中发展迅速，尤其是在化领域中the lifestyles of ordinary Chinese are also responsible for it 百姓的活式，也是原因之an increasing number of people are more willing to visit museums 越来越多的愿意去参观博物馆in order to gain an insight into 的是深了解the rich hist
35、ory and culture of our country 我国悠久的历史和绚烂的化3.Instead of just casting a glance at the pie chart,we are supposed toprobe into the root causes behind this noteworthy phenomenon.In myopinion,there are many factors at play.But no other factors are moresuitable than the following one.The lifestyles of col
36、lege students living incontemporary world are responsible for it,in that aincreasing number ofundergraduates are more willing to travel in order to enjoy the beauty of ourland,and ease the mounting pressures caused by academic pursuit.Considering what has been argued so far,whether it is positive Or
37、negative,one thing is certain that there is a growing tendency for the youngstudents to spend time and money on travelling,which I firmly believe will notchange in a short period of time.the lifestyles are responsible for it 活式是原因the lifestyles of college students living in contemporary world 活在当今世界
38、的学的活式|当代学的活式an increasing number of undergraduates 越来越多的学be more willing to do sth 更加愿意做某事in order to enjoy the beauty of nature 欣赏然的美景ease the mounting pressures 缓解益增加的压pressures caused by academic pursuit 因为学业带来的压considering what has been argued so far 综上所述|考虑迄今为被论述的内容whether it is positive or neg
39、ative 不论是积极的还是消极的one thing is certain that 件事情是确定there is a growing tendency 存在个增的趋势for sb to do sth 某做某事spend time and money on travelling 花时间钱在旅游which will not change in a short period of time 在短期内，不会有变化满分版本This pie chart presents the travel motivations of university students.37%of students travel
40、 to enjoy the scenery,33%to reduce pressure,9%to makefriends and 6%to develop independence and 15%for other reasons.There are several reasons to justify their motivations.For starters,thereis no substitute for the beauty of nature.Natural wonders,such as racingrivers and rising mountains,can fosters
41、 a deep understanding of thehuman-nature relationship and even become a source of strength,sustaining people through difficulties.Secondly,subject to buildingacademic pressure related to fierce competition in the job market,universitystudents sometimes find increasing stress undermining their mental
42、 health.They take trips isolated places with breathing views,which render arefreshing experience.The intangible benefits of travelling cannot be overstated.However,tomake the best of travelling experience,it is important for university studentsto have a balanced view of travelling.there is no substi
43、tute for the beauty of nature 然之美，可替代nature wonders 然奇观racing rivers and rising mountains 奔腾不息的喝河流和陡峭的脉foster a deep understanding of the human-nature relationship 培养与然的关系的深刻理解even become a source of strength 甚可以变成量的来源sustaining people through difficulties 帮助我们度过难关subject to building academic pressu
44、re related to fierce competition in the jobmarket 由于竞争益激烈的就业市场，（催出）越来越的学术压find increasing stress undermining their mental health 发现益增的压，损害了他们的理健康They take trips isolated places with breathtaking views,which render arefreshing experience.他们去偏远的地旅游，欣赏壮丽的景，这给他们带来新的体验。The intangible benefits of travelli
45、ng cannot be overstated.旅带来的形的好处，再怎么强调，也不为过。to make the best of the travelling experience 为了充分地利旅体验it is important for university students to have a balanced view of travelling.学平衡旅的很重要九、给出评论段Instead of just casting a glance at the pie chart,we are supposed toprobe into the root causes behind this n
46、oteworthy phenomenon.In myopinion,there are many factors at play.At the very beginning,Chinesetraditions and customs contribute greatly to it.Whats more,the lifestyles ofordinary Chinese people are more willing time send presents to their friendsand relatives to express their best wishes.According t
47、o what has been argued before,whether it is positive ornegative,one thing is certain that without further changes,there is no reasonto expect the situation would not continue in the foreseeable future.behind this noteworthy phenomenon 在这个值得注意的社会现象背后Chinese traditions and customs contribute greatly t
48、o it.中国的传统和习俗，是主要原因the lifestyles of ordinary Chinese 中国百姓的活式Chinese people are more willing to do sth 中国更愿意做某事send presents to their friends and relatives 给亲朋好友，赠送礼物to express their best wishes 表达他们最好的祝愿according to what has been argued before=based on what has beenmentioned above 综上所述whether it is
49、 positive or negative 不论是积极的，还是消极的one thing is certain that sv 个事情，是肯定的without further changes 没有进步的改变there is no reason to do sth 没有理由做某事to expect(that)the situation would not continue in the foreseeable future 期待该现状，在可以预的未来，不会继续下去总结1.图表作（趋势类）句作法描述图表段：Admittedly,the pie chart is intuitively compell
50、ing,and it explainshow popular this social phenomenon is.The chart shows thatsome remarkable changes has been place with regard to 表头.1.如图所示Based on the data provided,one can see that the number of A1趋势.2.数据趋势In the year of 年份起点，the number of A1 was just 数据起点，but within several years,it 趋势 to 数据终点.3
