1、第5讲 躲避常见的五种错误 语言是评判作文的一个极其重要的因素。在实际语言是评判作文的一个极其重要的因素。在实际的阅卷过程中的阅卷过程中,语法错误语法错误,尤其是较为严重的错误尤其是较为严重的错误,是是阅卷人员的主要“照顾点。因此阅卷人员的主要“照顾点。因此,认清各种各样的认清各种各样的语法错误语法错误,尽可能地少犯尽可能地少犯,对于提高作文分是有极大的对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。帮助的。错误错误1.句子成分残缺不全句子成分残缺不全(1)We always working till late at night before taking exams.改改:We always work ti
2、ll late at night before taking exams.(2)We should read books may be useful to us.改改:We should read books which may be useful to us.错误错误2.句子成分多余句子成分多余(1)This test is end,but there is another test is waiting for you.改改:One test ends,but another is waiting for you.(2)The driver of the red car was died
3、on the spot.改改:The driver of the red car died on the spot.错误错误3.主谓不一致主谓不一致(1)Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective.改改:Some think that reading should be selective.(2)My sister go to the cinema at least once a week.改改:My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week.错误错误4.动词时态、语态的误用
4、动词时态、语态的误用(1)I was walking along the road,and there are not so many cars on the street.改改:I was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street.(2)We have little time to read some books which we interest.改改:We have little time to read some books in which we are interested.(3
5、)I am a student who has studying in the college for two years.改改:I have been studying in the college for two years.错误错误5.词类混淆词类混淆(1)Honest is so important for everyone.改改:Honesty is so important for everyone.(2)The old man was hit by a car when he across the street.改改:The old man was hit by a car wh
6、en he was crossing the street.【过关检测】【过关检测】.写出以下经常写错的单词写出以下经常写错的单词 1.成功成功;成功的成功的 _ _ 2.大学大学 _ 3.语言语言 _ success(n.),succeed(v.),successful(adj.)college language 4.选择选择 _ 5.责任责任 _ 6.目前目前,现在现在 _ 7.方便的方便的,便利的便利的 _ 8.志愿者志愿者 _ choose(v.);choice(n.)responsibility nowadays convenient volunteer 9.社会社会 _ 10.耐心
7、耐心;病人病人 _ 11.当代的当代的 _ 12.观点观点,看法看法 _ 13.外国的外国的 _ 14.政府政府 _ society patience(n.);patient(adj.)modern opinion foreign government 15.环境环境 _ 16.促进促进,提升提升 _ 17.困难的困难的 _ 18.不同的不同的 _ 19.有必要的有必要的 _ 20.交流交流 _ environment promote difficult different necessary communicate.写出以下经常写错的短语写出以下经常写错的短语 1.在周末在周末 _ 2.对对
8、感兴趣感兴趣 _ 3.在网上在网上 _ 4.养成养成的习惯的习惯 _ on weekends be interested in on the Internet form/develop the habit of 5.总而言之总而言之 _ 6.重视重视 _ 7.在我看来在我看来 _ 8.为为树立好的典范树立好的典范 _ 9.和某人交流和某人交流 _ to sum up/in conclusion attach importance to in my opinion/as far as I am concerned set a good example to municate with sb.10
9、.我乐意做某事我乐意做某事 _ 11.不遗余力做某事不遗余力做某事 _ 12.在我业余时间在我业余时间 _ 13.做一名志愿者做一名志愿者 _ 14.文明和谐的社会文明和谐的社会 _ I am willing to do sth.spare no efforts to do sth.in my spare time work as a volunteer a civilized and harmonious society 15.高考高考 _ 16.长处和短处长处和短处 _ 17.容易得多容易得多 _ 18.对对有好处有好处 _ the College Entrance Examination
10、 advantages and disadvantages much easier do good to/be beneficial to 19.克服各种困难克服各种困难 _ 20.盼望您的早日回复盼望您的早日回复 _ _ overcome all kinds of difficulties Looking forward to your early reply.常用句型需牢记常用句型需牢记 1.我有很多爱好我有很多爱好,比方看小说比方看小说,跳舞等等。跳舞等等。(such as)_ _ 2.如果你能帮助我如果你能帮助我,我将不胜感谢。我将不胜感谢。(appreciate)_ I have m
11、any hobbies,such as reading novels,dancing and so on.I would appreciate it if you could help me.3.我想知道你能否帮助我解决这些困难。我想知道你能否帮助我解决这些困难。(help.with.)_ 4.在我看来在我看来,和你的父母经常交流是解决问题的关键和你的父母经常交流是解决问题的关键 所在。所在。(the key to)_ _ I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties.As far as I am concerned,communica
12、ting with your parents regularly is the key to solving the problem.5.我给您写信是给你一些建议。我给您写信是给你一些建议。(suggestion)_ 6.对于你的帮助对于你的帮助,我谨表示万分感谢。我谨表示万分感谢。(gratitude)_ _ I am writing to give you some suggestions.I show my heartfelt gratitude to your help/I am greatly grateful for your help.7.我对这个职位很感兴趣我对这个职位很感兴趣
13、,想申请这份工作。想申请这份工作。(apply for)_ _ I am interested in the position and want to apply for the job.8.踢足球和读故事是我的最爱踢足球和读故事是我的最爱,它们让我受益颇多。它们让我受益颇多。(which,do good to)_ _ Playing football and reading stories are my favorites,which do good to me a lot.9.我相信我相信,在老师和学生的共同努力下在老师和学生的共同努力下,我们的校园一我们的校园一 定在不久的将来会变成一个
14、更舒心的地方。定在不久的将来会变成一个更舒心的地方。(with the joint efforts of)_ _ _ I believe that with the joint efforts of both the teachers and students,our campus will become a more enjoyable place in the near future.10.如果你有其他任何问题如果你有其他任何问题,请让我知道。请让我知道。(any other)_ 11.我急迫地想得到您的帮助。我急迫地想得到您的帮助。(anxious)_ If you have any o
15、ther problem,please let me know.I am anxious to get help from you.12.我非常喜欢它我非常喜欢它,主要有以下两个原因。主要有以下两个原因。(mainly)_ 13.你现在学习和生活怎么样你现在学习和生活怎么样(how)_ I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons.How is everything going on with your life and study now 14.到了应该采取一些有效的措施来解决这个问题的到了应该采取一些有效的措施来解决这个问题的 时候了。时候了。(Its high time that)_ _ 15.很快乐能做一下自我介绍。很快乐能做一下自我介绍。(pleasure)_ Its high time that we should take/took some effective measures to solve the problem.It is my pleasure to introduce myself.
