1、第4讲 润色习作的四种策略 从书面表达的评分标准中可以看出从书面表达的评分标准中可以看出,恰中选用贴恰中选用贴切、地道的高级词汇句式对提高书面表达的得分非常切、地道的高级词汇句式对提高书面表达的得分非常重要。写作时恰当使用一些大多数考生有可能想不到重要。写作时恰当使用一些大多数考生有可能想不到的词汇句式的词汇句式,恰当地求新求异或使用较为高级的短语、恰当地求新求异或使用较为高级的短语、习语等来代替普通表达习语等来代替普通表达,可以提高文章的得分档次可以提高文章的得分档次,为为写作增添色彩。写作增添色彩。1.地道的英语词汇地道的英语词汇(1)The system has been designe
2、d _ _ the digital resources of the library.The system has been designed _ _ the digital resources of the library.to provide students with to give students quick and easy access to(2)The lecture is _ _ their skills of English learning.The lecture _ _ their skills of English learning.to let students b
3、e interested in English and improve is aimed at arousing students interest in English as well as improving(3)That evening,there will be _ shows of many local operas,which might be _.That evening,there will be _ shows of _ local operas,which might be _ _.wonderful enjoyable marvelous various a great
4、visual and auditory feast for us(4)_;cellphones are _._,cellphones _.Peoples living standards are improving more and more popular With the improvement of peoples living standards are flooding into our life 2.丰富的句型结构丰富的句型结构(1)Because the Earth Day was coming,our school has put up many posters to appe
5、al to us to join in the action for a greener earth._ _ _,our school has put up many posters to appeal to us to join in the action for a greener earth.As the Earth Day was drawing near/As the Earth Day was approaching/As the Earth Day was around the corner(2)Could we go to the bookshop this Sunday _
6、go to the bookshop this Sunday Would it be convenient for you if we(3)You will hold an art exhibition and are collecting suggestions about it._ and you are collecting suggestions about it.Ive learnt that an art exhibition is to be held(4)I think holding the art exhibition in Shanghai Museum is bette
7、r than in community libraries._ the art exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries.Personally speaking,its more advisable to hold(5)You can meet him at the airport and take him to his hotel._ you can meet him at the airport and take him to his hotel.I wonder whether youd be so kind th
8、at(6)I deliver a farewell speech here on behalf of the students in our school.I think its a great honor._ a farewell speech here on behalf of the students in our school.I feel it a great honor to deliver(7)There is a saying:Rome wasnt built in a day._,“Rome wasnt built in a day.As a proverb goes 3.多
9、样的表达方式多样的表达方式(1)Ive received your letter.You say that you are anxious about the coming Chinese speech contest.Im writing to offer you some advice._ you are anxious about the coming Chinese speech contest,Im writing to offer you some advice.Having received your letter saying that(2)I was motivated by
10、 the experience to have an open heart of learning.Im always trying to figure out what Im uncertain about._ _,Im always trying to figure out what Im uncertain about.Motivated by the experience to have an open heart of learning(3)Our school life is busy.We should never forget to spare some time to do
11、exercise and build our body._,we should never forget to spare some time to do exercise and build our body.Busy as our school life is(4)We experience failures.We should believe in ourselves and keep trying._,we should believe in ourselves and keep trying.Whatever failures we experience(5)You should k
12、now compromise isnt shameful.On the contrary,it may show how modest you are._ should know compromise isnt shameful.On the contrary,it may show how modest you are.It is you who(6)Volunteering is a good method.It is beneficial to both the schools construction and the individuals development._,voluntee
13、ring is a good method,_ beneficial to not only the schools construction but also the individuals development.Admittedly which is 4.自然的顺承衔接自然的顺承衔接(1)明承明承:On the one hand,we improve our skills by practice.On the other hand,we can cultivate our sense of cooperation and mutual help by participating in g
14、ames.暗接暗接:Apart from practicing regularly,we take part in some matches on behalf of our school.By participating in such activities,we broaden our horizons and strengthen our sense of cooperation.(2)明承明承:Firstly we held a meeting to discuss the procedures,and then we asked some students talented in c
15、omputer to program the video.After that,we played the video in the school lecture hall.暗接暗接:We began our work with a meeting discussing the procedures of making it.When all the work was done,we invited some gifted students to design the video.To our great joy,the video turned out to be a huge succes
16、s.【技法点金】【技法点金】巧妙润色妙笔生花巧妙润色妙笔生花 1.高级句式使用三原那么高级句式使用三原那么:高考英语书面表达评分标准鼓励考生使用高级词汇和高考英语书面表达评分标准鼓励考生使用高级词汇和 多种表达方式。但使用高级词汇并不等于使用一些偏多种表达方式。但使用高级词汇并不等于使用一些偏 难、古怪的词汇难、古怪的词汇,而是使用一些表意准确、形象生动、而是使用一些表意准确、形象生动、语法正确且符合以英语为母语的人的习惯表达方式的语法正确且符合以英语为母语的人的习惯表达方式的词汇。在使用多种句式时词汇。在使用多种句式时,应遵循以下原那么应遵循以下原那么:高级但高级但不造作不造作,多变但不离谱多变但不离谱,复杂但不晦涩。平时注重有意复杂但不晦涩。平时注重有意识地积累和背诵原汁原味的英语句子或文章识地积累和背诵原汁原味的英语句子或文章,有意识地有意识地尝试使用或模仿。尝试使用或模仿。2.注重行文逻辑两连接注重行文逻辑两连接:对于连贯、自然的表达对于连贯、自然的表达,要注重作文的逻辑要注重作文的逻辑,以及学会以及学会 明承与暗接两种连接方式。明承需要有大量连接词积明承与暗接两种连接方式。明
