1、中考英语作文专项训练一、考点分析：在中考中，写作占20分，分值所占比例大，而写作考察学生的英文综合运用能力，因此非常关键。【中考英语作文的评分标准】比较为学生所熟悉的就是“8+8+4”结构，即：（一）内容：7-8分：内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。5-6分：内容基本切题，意思大致连贯，表达基本清楚、但不够完整。2-4分：内容不够切题，意思不够连贯，表达不够清楚、有些离题。0-1分：文不对题，表达不清。（二）语言：词数：每少5个字扣0.5分，以此类推。只写出个别单词、词不成句不给分。拼写：每错扣0.5分，同一错误不重复计数。语法：同标点符号、大小写：每两处错误扣0.5分，但扣分总和不超过1分
2、。（三）组织结构：内容充实、上下文连贯、用语规范、表达准确、无语法错误；词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给3-4分。内容充实、不写废话；上下文连贯、用语规范、表达准确、无或少见语法错误；词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给2分。一般情况下，内容和语言累计得分在15分以上者（含），方可得到1-2分组织结构分。内容和语言在15分以下者，如文中有值得肯定的好句型和表达，可酌情考虑给1分组织结构分。通篇句型、句式单一、词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，一般也不予给组织结构分。二、写作中常见问题：内容空洞，没有清晰的思路，表达能力不强，表达生硬呆板，甚至中式英语翻译思
3、维。议论过多，描写不足。大多数情况下，把议论当成的作文的重点，常常跑题。句式单一，都是简单句，缺少复合句。结构散漫，思维跳跃，文章缺乏条理性。连词的使用较少，并且使用单一，句子之间的连接很生硬。 文章平淡，无亮点短语和句型，连接词等。三、写作技巧分析：【高分作文的必备元素】1. 书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。2. 不出现语法，拼写，标点，大小写等错误。3. 文章字数最好控制在80-100字之间，切记过长或者过短，8-10句即可。4. 要点齐全。为了避免遗漏要点，可以将题目中给出的要点标注出来。5. 开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。6. 连接词使用恰当，不重复，上下文有连贯性，
4、使之自然成一体。7. 应用词汇: 高级词汇的合理使用、同义词的变化使用、短语的恰当使用。8. 多用亮点短语，并且使短语多样性，尽可能使用多种表达方式。比如：同一个意思“帮助”，假如你就用一个动词“help”，显得词汇贫乏。如果能在作文中不断地变换方式，用help、give sb. a hand、do sb. a favor、be in need of 等以表达“帮助”，表达更灵活生动。9.句式多样性，可适当使用陈述句，疑问句，祈使句及感叹句，强调句，倒装句，定语从句，状语从句，宾语从句等。10. 能够恰当使用谚语、格言、名言等给文章添彩。11. 语法结构多样性,主动被动交叉用，原级比较级灵活用
5、，非谓语动词恰当用。12.灵活使用万能句型，增添文章亮点。四、中考经典范文解读：VII. Writing (作文) （共20分）94. Write at least 60 words on the topic “I want to invent _”(以“我想要发明_”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)（注意：1、在答题纸上将题目补充完整。2、短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）The following is for reference only. (以下表达仅供参考) It can be used to It will be exciting/nec
6、essary/helpful to范文精选一及点评：I want to invent a flying car It is not uncommon to meet traffic problems and serious air pollution in big city. It is a must to have a plan to improve the serious condition. I get an idea to design my own flying machine like a car which can drive well in the street as well
7、 as fly between the high rises to avoid the traffic jam. Whats more, when it is moving ,it can transform the motion energy into electricity to drive the engine. Thus, it is possible to save a lot of fuel and reduce the air pollution. It is of great use to solve the problems of traffic jam and air po
8、llution ,and even save the natural resource. Bright idea can only be achieved with the determination and courage. I believe my idea will turn a new leaf of future life.精彩亮点分析：亮点一：高分短语亮点二：it is a must 活用高频词亮点三：定语从句描述自己设计的汽车亮点四：高分短语亮点五：be of great use 名词结构更高端亮点六：被动语态，丰富句式亮点七： turn a new leaf of future
9、 life 翻开未来生活的新篇章-范文精选二及点评：I want to invent a time machine As a student who is experiencing unprecedented modern life nowadays, I would rather learn about the history and the future life of human being from a real experience than learn from a textbook. Thats why if I can work as a great inventor, inv
10、enting a time machine will be my first choice. The most important usage of my time machine will be visiting one of best schools in Tang Dynasty. As we all know, Tang Dynasty is famous for its open-minded education. Therefore, when I visit the school of the ancient city, I can not only try different
11、ways of studying but communicate with people from different countries as well. Using a time machine is the most vivid way to learn history as it is both a record of mankind and a mirror of past, I am looking forward to the day when my time machine comes out.精彩亮点分析：亮点一：定语从句修饰对学生现在的生活亮点二：用would rather
12、 than 表达学生的意愿亮点三：用if条件状语从句表达主题亮点四：be famous for 因而著名亮点五：not only but as well 不但而且亮点六：用动名词词组做主语亮点七：用idiom突出历史的重要性亮点八：定语从句表达学生的期待-范文精选三及点评：I Want To Invent A Family Doctor Robot I want to invent a family doctor robot, which can be used to cure the illness without going out of their home. As far as Im
13、concerned, it will be extremely helpful and useful because of the following reasons: First, you can see the doctor immediately at home when you feel sick or get hurt. It can save us a lot of time, especially in emergency situations. Furthermore, hospitals today are always filled with patients, not e
14、veryone can be taken good care of. However, with the help of our robot doctors, you can talk to your personal doctor one to one whenever you want.In short, family doctor robots can make great contribution to our society.精彩亮点分析：亮点一：全文巧用“first, furthermore, in short” 等连接词，把家庭机器人医生的好处写的非常清晰，让阅卷老师一目了然。亮
15、点二：全文采用了定语从句、状语从句、并列句等多种长难句，为文采分增色不少。亮点三：文中出现了“extremely, make contribution to” 这些超纲单词及词组，恰到好处地强调了家庭机器人医生的重要性，且为文采再次进行润色。VII. Writing (作文)（共20分）94. Write at least 60 words on the topic “Im ready”(以“我准备好了”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标题符号不占格)你对明天一定有着美好的憧憬，为此，你已经做好了哪方面的准？请结合你的经历或特长等，选取一个角度具体谈谈你是如何做准备的。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）The following is for reference only.(以下内容及供参考) Independent be good at. Responsible
